Portfolio Temp

Could i plz get some constructive critice?



Here is the edited version

 

Looks good. A few more details will make it amazing:

1) Overall, the design is a bit flat and needs to stand out more. Do something to set the content away from the background, eg. a drop shadow and spice up your header because it's definitely lacking something. For a portfolio you'll want to prove to people that you're a great designer and before they see any of your work, they'll be looking at your site.

2) The headers 'home' 'gallery' etc, are too big for the bar. Maybe reduce the font size and set the text away from the edge of the bar.

3) Your spelling really isn't very good (yes, I do realise this is only a template but...). Poor spelling/grammar will instantly detract visitors from staying at your site.

4) The domain myport.com is already registered. I'm afraid I just assumed that you don't own it, so I'm sorry if you do!:

http://www.whois.net/whois_new.cgi?d=myport.com



Hope that helps

 

thx for the coment. Nah i didnt know it was a site named MyPort.com. it just seem like a good name for a portfolio site.
I will change that, and plz can you say wich words that are wrongly spelled. My grammar sux, i know

 

Its pretty nice, but not my style.

 

Sort colours and text. That's your first step.

 

I threw in the edited version, critic on it plz

 

bump, what you think. positive and negative!

 

Sure:

In the first template:

1) "Wich signature is the bether"

should be,

"Which signature is the best" (Better should only refer to comparisons between two things. I'm a bit pedantic, I know...)

2) "I" should always be capital

In the second:

3) "makeing" should be "making"


I suspect that some are probably typos. Best thing to do would be to paste your content into Word, or something with a grammar/spell checker.

 

The 1st one looks pretty nice. Just work on your spelling. "Bether" should be "Better" but as someone else said it should say "which is best?"

Also you don't say "Copyrighted to name here" You say "©2006 name here", or something along those lines, but don't say "copyrighted"

The text on the banner of the second one needs alot of work.

Stick with version 1 in my opinion.

 

tyvm for the reply, I usually dont mind my spelling. The design is what i try to improve most. But afteral the spelling makes a impression. Personaly i like the second temp bether than the first one, but you think the first one is bether?

What does people think i should continue on. Temp 1 or 2?

 

*better

2nd one

 

The first seems to have more potential to me.

 

Best I've ever seen

 

-_-

 

lmao dont blame me, im norwegian.