Poetry

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  1. StoneSoup

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    Hey guys. Don't know if any of you enjoy poetry, but usually artistic minded people do have a taste for literature and so I thought I would create a thread in 'entertainment' for the purpose of poetry. After all, I consider poetry a form of entertainment. I will post my poem I just wrote and if you guys would, give me comment and critique on it :) If you guys want to, submit your own poems and I will comment and critique them. It should be fun to see what all of your creative minds come up with. Lets have fun with this :D

    My Poem,
    My Demise: Resolved by StoneSoup

    My demise, ever closer approaching
    encroaching, smothering remnants of loathing
    knowing: certain, absolute, no doubt
    time dwindles with each breath I breathe out

    yet selfishly, constantly striving for fame
    when despite achievements, it all ends the same
    so I let it all go, no longer a means to my end
    no longer bound by rules and truth that it bends

    Now there is calm, I have left it to the Maker
    No more harboring hate, only faith in a Saviour
    Realization, putting it in the hands of my God
    Letting Him have all these fears that I've got

    Cherish each second, the life that you're livin'
    Enjoy every moment in the time you've been given.
    Then in the end, no loathing, cry no more tears
    After all, it is He who made your dreams AND your fears

    Well, that was it. Hope you guys can do some CnC on it and post some of your own work as well. Look forward to seeing some posts in this thread!

    Thanks,
    <3
    Stone
     
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    Beautiful
     
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