was messing around for a little while and got this kinda liked it so i added a couple finishing touches CnC i suppose
Light sourse is in the wrong spot, and the effects covering his face need to go. It needs better focal, and depth. The effects you have, those little confetti looking things, are way to bright and throw off the sigs flow. The text isnt that great either. Needs some work but it has potential.
^ Word. I also add that the c4d don't really work well in this one. The text should be more noticable.
