Hmmm, crank up the mid-tones just a lil' bit and it'll be much better. Good tag, with solid composition and contrast. Focal is a little unclear, but not in an overly problematic way. 8/10
MATE THIS IS BRILLIANT the only thing i could complain about is maybe make the focal a little more clear. and anyone who complains about black and white gets a slap from the black and white king aka me.