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Discussion in 'GR Classic Archive' started by tZ .lacieed, Jul 5, 2006.

  1. Jul 5, 2006 at 5:22 AM #1
    tZ .lacieed

    tZ .lacieed Well-Known Member

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    Here it is

    some serious C&C please

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  2. Jul 5, 2006 at 5:27 AM #2
    Pharell

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    Looks nice, good techniques used, you could've changed the colors of the original stock, text could be better. Nice work.
     
  3. Jul 5, 2006 at 5:40 AM #3
    tZ .lacieed

    tZ .lacieed Well-Known Member

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    I suxzor at text :D
    teh colors look nice imo
     
  4. Jul 5, 2006 at 5:42 AM #4
    Dior

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    The filters are way to obvious. If you get some more depth it would be nice. The text is good. :)
     
  5. Jul 5, 2006 at 5:49 AM #5
    tZ .lacieed

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    mkay
    tell me how to add depth :D
     
  6. Jul 5, 2006 at 5:50 AM #6
    UV Mathrix

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    cause all ur doing is smuding the origanal, ur not adding anything else to it which will help integrate that into the piece.
     
  7. Jul 5, 2006 at 5:55 AM #7
    tZ .lacieed

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    I didnt smudged that much
     
  8. Jul 5, 2006 at 6:24 AM #8
    ELECTRIX

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    is smudgingand filters are all you did basicaly? if so then its not that great. unless you have a diffrent story.
     
  9. Jul 5, 2006 at 7:16 AM #9
    tZ .lacieed

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    err no =\
    its a diff. story
     
  10. Jul 5, 2006 at 2:23 PM #10
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    clever
     
  11. Jul 5, 2006 at 6:19 PM #11
    Vipes

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    soz i just see smudging of guitar
     

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