Oxyrave Need C+c

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  1. Rc!

    Rc! Well-Known Member

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    need some C+C on this peice tell me if there is somin that really needs improving.

    no one say smooth the render out, I wanted to create somin rough and jaggedy.

    EDIT: Just removed text.

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  2. Dior

    Dior -1xx,x00 credits.

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    Looks kinda blurry and grainy, and the text is, erm, no offewnce but awful. =/

    I would like to see some blending on the main concept somewhere, and some mroe lightning+flow. The bg could be more attractive aswell.

    Altough, i <3 the colors :D
     
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    Can never do text so I will work on that I think. I dont think the image is grainy.

    Forgot to say, no one say smooth the render out, I wanted to create somin rough and jaggedy.

    I will work on text though.
     
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    It looks... euhm... different. I think that the whole c4d (or w/e that is) should be blended more. but it's not bad :)
     

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