One Of My First Temp

Hi everybody i've just finish to do avery basic template but i want your opinions on it.So here it is.

 

WTF? That looks very.... odd.

 

OK I understand its your first. So now some constructive criticism.

The header is not workin at all and get rid of the odd "angle" thing on it. The content headers dont match up with the content boxes and the stroke around everything is all F'd up. Again, I understand its a first but I really dont like it at all. Practice with some tutorials and check out some of the other temps posted on here like Mr. Cheeky's work for example. He does some really sleek temps and is a good guide to go by as far as what looks pro.

As always, keep workin and dont give up!

 

LMAO WTF IS IT JUST ME OR IS THE BANNER FALLING OVER IM TRIPPIN OUT

 

Ya for a minute I thought I shouldnt have cracked open that last tallboy!

 

you should line up the content boxes and make them all with the same thivkness of line around them