Oli Sykes Tag

C&C Please

 

I think the "oliver sykes" font works really well, but the other one... not so much. You have some cool effects, but the flow is weird in my opinion. The horizontal lines on the right throw it off.

Nice feel, depth could be better.

 

Yeah, I've been getting that the text takes away from the focal of the tag.

Thanks Trans

 

Work on the right, then it will be sick.

 

Any suggestions on what I should do with it?

 

Go smudge or pentool for some nice Glowline around his arm or something just fool around and see what works

Its the easiest way to see what you like and dislike

 

Alright, thanks Fluxen.