This is my 1st try in something like that. Here is what I did b4 some mins, tried to make it better. * It's not the same render but the same style. C&C plz.
1st one: i don't like the colors on this one .. she looks like black and white and you put in a colorfull C4d in it that doesn't match .. also, don't just randomly place in stuff try to make it flow good .. and don't do much effects over your focal to much .. otherwise it will look low quality like on this one .. i do like the text .. also the blue line behind the text .. just try to experiment with al kind of things but make it match good .. i'd rate this one with 6/10 2nd one: this one is better then the 1st one .. mainly because the colors are good .. again .. the focal looks low quality but not much .. and also try to not place the c4d so close to her .. it looks like she is drowning in a lake full of c4d .. but i do like this one more so just keep experimenting and reading tuts .. and you'll improve in no time keep it up
