oh noez, slasher said it. Text does not match at all =/ too bright, text in the corner not really doing much. honestly the whole thing just doesnt come together well, but thats just my opinion
Sorry to be breaking you down like slasher, but it makes sense... The colors (there's simply just one) are too monotone, the renders potential is unfulfilled, and with the over-lighting you lack any sense of lighting...