Old School (the Name Of The Lp)

Discussion in 'Large Artwork' started by midnight, Jun 3, 2008.

  1. midnight

    midnight Well-Known Member

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    well this is my first lp is a really long ti... wait... nope this is my first lp:

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    Need to work on type.

    Rest is all good.

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    thanks
     
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    i like it mate, good job
     
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    seems a little plain, and text could be better
    but its some good stuff nj
     
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    thanks for the comments
     
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    Pretty sick piece. But i feel like you could have done more with the background.
     
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    yea, the bg is lacking something, a bit too much open space? or maybe need some differnt colors in there?
     
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    i like it :D

    good first lp, just add something in the bg and work on text. :D
     
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    looks awsome
     
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    I don't think that colors are the problem, because those look good. I think everything in the piece is well balanced. The only flaw I see is the text. Great job for a first LP
     
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    Nice Work!!
    I Really love it
     

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