Ok I Finally Decided To Give Templates Another Try

C&C plz.

I might sell this for like real money. i reallly like it.


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User posted message.

 

yyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ^^

 

whoops sorry, didn't see messed up image. here you go

 

not bad but you need to fix your menu
by the way how much? ^_^

 

a major improvement from your earlier ones, keep it up

 

yyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ^^ [/b][/quote]
thought you banned yourself.

ANyways its good, but I dont think its good enough to sell, bit plain and the menu needs some attention.

 

I don't like it very much.

Navigation looks like a quick job just text with a box beside it?
Banner is ... Dull.
Logo has a very thick stroke = yuck.
Buttons are too bright.

The rest is pretty good.

 

Not worth real money, but stick at it and you will get better.

 

Okay, what should I add to the menu/take away?

The boxes to me, seem a lil messy, i might switch those up, move them around and stuff.

any ideas?


EDIT: whoops, typo.

 

it looks good but the red banner thing looks out of place to me