If you knew the render was choppy, why didn't you fix it? Colors are terrible, monotone, and the render is way too big. I like the top left bg but everything else needs work.
anoter sig thats way to big. and the render eats up that whole big space also you didnt put any effort in colorand the bg is really basic. looks like just a random c4d with no flow depth nothing :$
thanx guys you know what actually when i first made it i thought it looked good then i posted it and was like wtf and didn't have time to take it down but nevertheless thanx for your feedback