No. Three

Third render.

 

you are crankign these things out realy fast, take your time and go more slowly so they are less choppy and look better

 

yes, i agree. take your time. making a good render cut-out takes time and precision. dont make unnessecary mistakes.

 

Maybe I would improve if people actually took the time to leave a descriptive list of what I need to improve on. If you tell me to "do better" or "make less choppy" that won't help, will it? Tell me where it's choppy, tell me what needs to be done better, ok?

 

see how the side of the head is jagged? Use smaller cuts, take more time, and be more presice and you will get a smoother render.