that black spots on the corners kinda kill it for it also think you could have done something more with the text
i like what you did to the side edges but the bottom and top edges dont really fit in imo could use more effects but its very nice and simple
way to sharpend and the lightign is wrong...try creating the lightign a lot less and reduce shapren or spatter coz its too strong.The text is okay i suppose but jus work ont e basic 1st/
