Newest Sig

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Ocronius, Dec 6, 2007.

  1. Dec 6, 2007 at 10:30 PM #1
    Ocronius

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    Newest sig plz rate and comment on what i can improve on
     
  2. Dec 6, 2007 at 10:51 PM #2
    .Atreyu

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    Text is cool but I dont think B/W works for this sig. The background looks a little plain and the focal is kinda lost amongst the smudging. I would suggest adding some color for depth and then sharpen your main render up. Do love the text though.

    Keep up the good work :)
     
  3. Dec 6, 2007 at 10:54 PM #3
    deF!ant

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    try addong colors or try also addins some effects to it looks blank but think text is nice
     
  4. Dec 6, 2007 at 11:06 PM #4
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    The background is rather repetitive. Your composition is off, and your render isn't blended all too well. It lacks definition, and your text placement is off. Good work on the smudging though.
     
  5. Dec 7, 2007 at 10:37 AM #5
    Ocronius

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    What does composition and definition mean, Ive know that these are important parts of a sig but i just dont know what they are, someone plz clarify
     
  6. Dec 7, 2007 at 11:04 AM #6
    Xial

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    mind sharing the render? :P I wanna make something sexy out of it D:
     

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