Newest Attempt

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by brizee77, Aug 12, 2008.

  1. brizee77

    brizee77 Junior Member

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    Alright my newest attempt.. Hopefully it show's some improvement :rolleyes:

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    Ideas for improvement always welcome :D
     
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    hmm well it still needs major work :(
     
  3. brizee77

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    hmmmm I don't mind hearing that I still need work to do on something..

    I know I am far from perfect, but it would be helpful to know what needs improving instead of just a pretty much it sucks comment lol :P

    The only major problem I have with it personally is that I blurred the shoulder on the right side too much :( that whole little area didn't turn out right for what I wanted so I am already gonna try to work on that....

    Any other actual suggestions anyone?
     
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    i stay away from soft brushing the edges of a render, almost always ends bad for you, just try some tuts around gamerenders, helped me out heaps.
     
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    Any better?? I redid the render to get rid of the background around the headphones and did alot less blur of the render on the right side... I still like the blur on the left tho I just toned it down a bit... Still can't get the effects to look right on the right side tho :(


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    looks ok

    tone down the render, it dont suit the bg. maybe with a few gradient maps. really nice text tho.
     
  7. brizee77

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    Oki tried latest suggestion...

    Any comments on the results... My fav is the last one I think but then again my opinion is not always the best to go on lol

    I am still trying my best to learn blending techniques and the right color choices...

    It's just so bloody hard to get the hang of.... especially since if you ask 20 different people, I usually get 20 different answers on what looks better :(

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  8. xXEwartXx

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    i would suggest the tuts , i m a complete noob still but the tuts have greatly improved what i can do.
     
  9. astranger79

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    yes definitely tuts wld help, i'd stop refining the sig now, the render doesnt really fit to begin with.
     

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