Newer Junk

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Krish, Nov 22, 2007.

  1. Krish

    Krish Well-Known Member

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    Tight tags, I kinda like the text on the 1st
     
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    All of them need better blending and depth. Also work on the colors. Take off the text one #1, it takes away from the focal.

    I like #2 best. Nice smudging.
     
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    Colors don't work on the first one. Needs some better blending too. The blue behind him isn't working imo. That purple C4D on the right side messes up the flow.

    Second tag is by far the best of the three. Nice smudging and effects. Colors are tight also. Just blur the background a bit to create more depth.

    Third tag needs work. The three colors on the left don't fit in imo. And the way the render is grayed out really doesn't make it look good. Effects are alright but I think you can add more to it.
     
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    I think these could use better blending. The colors just really don't go good with each other. Maybe try some gradient maps or photo filters. They also seem to be lacking depth and lighting =x For some depth you could either use the sharpen or blur tool. For lighting you can try using a big soft brush with the main light color for the lighting.

    Although, the second one really pretty cool =) Nice job!

    ~Dardan
     
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    i like these s lot but could have a little more depth
     
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    First is nice but colour and text needs work.

    Other 2 need to lighten up and more compo. nice tho.
     
  8. Krish

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    Thanks dawgs.
     
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    2 is best ;)
     
  10. Krish

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    thanks dude.
     
  11. Anesthetik

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    fix up the color and the text in the first one and it would be nice. but i really like the second one, you did awesome with it. but in the 3rd one i really like the background in it.
     
  12. Krish

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    Thanks :).
     
  13. Hoplite_A2

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    Perty good.
    The first one - i love the compo, but the colors look wierd.
    The second one - Love it to death, just blur that bg. ;)
    The third one - A little odd. Not bad, just odd. Strikes the eyes strangely. It might be the colors. ???

    Overall,
    I'd say, spend a litle more time on your foculs. ;) That helps.
    Blending is cool, But I didn't see that as a problem in these tags. ;) (maybe the 3rd one.)

    Good work
     

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