Newbie Sig?

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by p1llowp4nts, Oct 1, 2008.

  1. p1llowp4nts

    p1llowp4nts Well-Known Member

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    hey guys was messing around with this render i found from gh: wt and its a little osmething i came up with.

    personally i think its alittle crowded, and ill prob fix that later, but i wanna know what you guys think so far

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    heres a small version:

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  2. .Statik

    .Statik Well-Known Member

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    tbh its not that bad at all, maybe change the text and make it smaller, mine are 390x150, try and make it smaller to your likings

    is this one of your first sigs? if it is can i see the orig image so i know what youve added?
     
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    change the text and scale it some.

    also needs depth even though it is that abstract/vector type of tag. work with that. particles would be legit too.
     
  4. p1llowp4nts

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    heres the original render, I only added some brushing really, and ill work on the text

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  5. Basaiken

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    It reminds me of one of my buddies paintings. He has this crazy style and I see some of it in this tag.

    My first piece of criqtique would be to make the canvas a bit smaller. Maybe around 500 x 150 or something similar. That's just me though, I don't like big canvas.

    The text kind of suits the piece in my opinion so I think you should keep it that way but make it a bit more legible.

    Other than that I agree it doesn't have much flow. I see a lot of random brushes without much depth. Whenever you brush make sure it has a purpose and it flows well with your sig. Other than that this is a crazy piece man. I like the concept!
     
  6. p1llowp4nts

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    thanks =], its the kinda concept i was going for

    and well i fixed the size abit ill work on the brushing and depth a bit more

    er btw can any one give me some pointers or tips on how i can make this whole depth thing work? =]
     

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