I like the smudging, but the main render is too blurry, needs sharpened so it can hold it's own with the sharper smudging
Agree with the above. The focal has become the smudging in the center - if thats what you wanted then thats ok but for me the logical focal would be the render. try blurring the tag and sharpening the render a bit. Other than that though, like the smudging style and great colours
