I like this template as its a brillant learning curve into the need for planning the template before you make it.. Good luck with your furth templates! I look forward to seeing your templates here again..
1. The banner doesnt fit with the rest of the template, its just a simple grunge brush BG which doesnt fit with the plain and simple template. Place a photo or image with a normal BG not a brushed one. 2. The menu is bad. Suppose you gone make a real site of it then you wouldnt have enough subsites to place links to there. You would get sumthing like Home... More Home, another home, support, some other support, blablabla, Its just to big, make some buttons instead. 3. The content boxes are way to plain. You only used custom shape tool with a stroke. Put some more time and effort in it. A good template isnt made in just 5 minutes. (Unless you are reeeaaallly good or have worked it all out on paper, but then it should be even more then 5 minutes cuz it would be a lot more detailed site) 4. Small detail in compare with the other comments: the box with thumbnails to other websites is smaller then the others. GL with designing sites. Put more time in your designs, maybe follow some tuts and stuff and make them less plain.
it looks good if i didnt see your other one they look almost exactly the same a little changes buit not big ones so you should try to get some diff styles but nj nice work
