http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e394/S-a...rtfloioTemp.png This is one of my 1st templates. Its plain I didnt add a banner or any text besides in the banner because I was going to sell it and let whoe ver bought it change the banner c&C is appreciated.
i dont really like it at all. too many patterns, and the bg pic is horrible, its not that plain, just ugly.... keep trying though
To many paterns, maybe you could read a tut which will teach you how to make such a better website.. Shows very much potenial for a first attempt!
The pattern is really bad. It makes the site ugly. And the layout is done so many times before, its getting boring. Not your foult but its just getting boring. Atleast you put time in your template so thats good, follow some tutorials.
I don't like it. The font is vulgar and overused, and the stroke is far too heavy. It is all prety simple really, the patterns will make it hard to expand, without it getting messed up, you should really lose them, and also the headers on the contact boxes do not look good. the banner is also too simple, try adding something into it to liven it up a bit, maybe a render, or a stock image, depending on what the template is for.
