New Tag

Tried som new things.
C/C

 

nice tag
nice effects but the left side is lacking
the white desing to the left is nice but its screwing the tag up
overall good though 8/10

 

Needs a bit more depth.

 

Nice job, really like it

 

great flow! really awesome tag! GJ!

 

i really like the effects and flow .. but the contrast is not so good
and also .. the render is to dark and the rest is to white .. maybe some more dark spots

but the rest is kinda good

 

should be a little darker other then that it looks good imo keep it up

 

The flow is excellent. Add something to clear up the neg space. Fix the lighting, its totally off and try and create more of a sense of depth.