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i like it, might add a better light source later

 

Work on typo as well imo. Not sure what to do though, sorry ;(

Just mess around for a bit

 

a bit too yellow imo
work on the text too
nice try though

 

yea, text is alway bad 4 me

 

I love it man....

 

thanks pyro

 

Doesnt have a definite focal point. Fix that and give text another go =)

 

text and chaotic but nice job anyways bro

 

thanks for comments i appreciate it

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any more comments? please?

 

comments please