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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by KiTa, Oct 4, 2008.

  1. Oct 4, 2008 at 5:33 PM #1
    KiTa

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  2. Oct 4, 2008 at 5:56 PM #2
    Frankish2004

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    Text could be bigger and his face bit too sharp, nice bg tho
     
  3. Oct 4, 2008 at 6:35 PM #3
    chipmunk2k5

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    you don't really have a focal point and the text needs a bit work.. also try and create some depth
     
  4. Oct 4, 2008 at 8:23 PM #4
    mParanoia

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    Shrek is totally the focal...

    Anyways, I really like this one. Like someone else said, he's a bit over sharpened, but other than that it's really great.
     
  5. Oct 4, 2008 at 10:21 PM #5
    Vox470

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    Shrek looks like turds on cake. Could be an excellent abstract if shrek wasnt there >_>

    other than that smudging looks decent. sharpen it a bit though, and possibly topaz if you've got it.
     
  6. Oct 4, 2008 at 11:56 PM #6
    KiTa

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    yeah i wasnt sure if i should blur the sides or not.
     
  7. Oct 5, 2008 at 12:54 AM #7
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    yea like people have said before me shrek is a little to sharp, and i agree with vox. but you did a good job with this one.
     

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