I'm sort of expecting this not to be liked because of the style, etc. So don't worry about it. haha. I wanted to go for a look like as if you can't see all of her, but want to see more, as if something is in the way that you can't move.
I think the idea you want to do is cool but there's better ways of doing it, this one i'm not feeling, suggestion: you can have a bar or something across her eyes you know.
The bar across eye thing is so old and it wouldn't be appropriate for this style imo.. I think it looks good.. Lighting is quite strong
Doesn't look very good imo, i know what you were looking for. But it just looks like you were done with a sig and thought that it looked bad and just pasted a c4d above it without even blending it properly with the background.
Looks cool but it just seems a little awkward like you just placed it there but it blends in nicely. Really hard to explain.
Hmm, I know the affect your going for... but im probably gona sound like typical male lol, but that should be done with like a bathin suit pic imo or something mabey thats just because of years of media brainwashing lol.
I really like the concept, but I feel like it could be have been done better. Good colors, decent lighting. Depth could be better.
