See...i couldnt find a render...so this is what it is for me, hope it is an inspiration peice for u. Its when its a hot day, and you hav been working for hours, without water...you are dizzy, and have a headache. This guy happens to be trying to bet throught a high grassed field in the midday..around 3-4 o clock. Is this any good?
it needs something in it like u said...a render would at least spice it up and the text isn;t really eye catching also cuz normally it;s your blending and render evan