the fonts are bad, make sure with a regular font, especially a cursive 1, that the text anti-aliasing is at strong or smooth, and NOT none.... ther than that pretty good works, stay away from using those highlight bars too much, 6/10, if your work on these things you could make them 8/10's easily
agree, second one is excellent but the opacity line ruins it why you put it on top of the main image? also the font doesnt fit the sig you prolly wont get much response on the top one coz that image of the soldier has been used and overused already