I'm still kinda new with C4D's and I'd like to improve my signatures, so please gimme some C&C. Tried to make it look cool with blurring and lightning effects.
I would try looking at some c4d tutorials they help you blend in c4ds better and i would try to get c4ds cut out and place them over the render to help it blend in more. Colors need a boost to motone of a color maybe some redish in there somewhere.