C and C please. what needs to be done to this. i feel that something more is needed. thanks. v1 v2 i went back and added a few things
You need imo to work a lot on the colors. It's way too monotone. Also, the bar at his right is very out of place. Maybe if you write some text to go with it.. anyway it's a pretty good tag overall, just work on the colors a lot! Good job =)
Add a red,yellow,blue gradient map. Set it to around screen 30-50 opacity. That should give it more colour. If that blending doesnt work or the opacity, change it a bit.