Yikes! Bright, aint it? Well, I like the concept, but the brightness throws it WAY off. Try to tone down on how bright it is and maybe try different shades or colors than yellow; it looks too monotoned as it is. Also, it looks a little flat and could use some form of depth, whether it be blurring or lighting changes. Besides that, looks pretty nice.
one sec, lemme put my shades on........ ah there we go. its just a lid bit bright, lol. It's hard to see if there is other probs tho cuz of that brightness. Tone is down and repost is possible.
