It took me some time to get everything right but i tried to use some of th advice i gotten past few days but i hope i nailed it more than some of my other. C&C
Also can anyone give me some advice if u see something wrong which with my skills i know there has to be
Text looks bad, but im not too good at it either so i can't help with that. Also try to find some higher quality looking stuff it looks sort of lq to me. But its a nice concept.