no offense but i dont like it at all. the render needs more brushing and blending. the text looks flat. take your circular marquee tool and select render then right click feather 20-30 pxls. then take your eraser tool with big brush and lower opacity of eraser to about 15-20 and slower go around render till it fades in nicely. Further more change the font just maybe a diffrent style or something.
hmm what brush do you use for the white specs in the back ground? The sigs good, maybe the opacity of the worrier could be just a little less though.
It's nice, the only thing that you may want to change is the text. It's simple and doesn't really match with the bg. When I do text I usually make it white, put it under the color balance layer and change it's blending mode to soft light. Then I add some effects and a 1pix black stroke, of course. Another thing, maybe try to blend your render in more because it looks like just stuck it on there and put a few brushes on top of it. Other then that, good job.
It's better now, but the render still doesn't look great. Try erasing the edges with a grunge brush set to 100% Opacity and 50% Flow. I think it looks better than feathering and is pretty simple to do.
Cabron blending to the background means you make the pic look like it's in the background and make it the same oclor as the background!
i have to tell ya, i dont like the render. i like the bg. and i like the font like the shape and size but bavel and emboss it or something, add more effect. its boring you just see a glowing text/font. for your render try hue saturation, or color balance. that should work <_<
I usually put my render under the color balance and go image - adj - desaturate. Then take the eraser tool and use a soft air brush and/or grunge brush and erase the edges.