Check it out just finished about 5 minutes ago tell me what u think i believe im getting better only been doing for 2 weeks today tell me what u think please C&C please
The render is WAY too blended in, the text really doesnt flow with the rest of it, and it seems way to flat in terms of layout. I mean, the render and effects barely break the dull brown color of the whole thing and it lacks depth. Nice try, but it didnt really come out that well. Sorry
I dont know, its gotta a different kind of feel to it i like! And the whole two week thing... Damn fine job Tonexe!!
My comments are taking them or leaving them. I only give so-called 'harsh' comments when I want to help someone improve on their art. I don't baby newcomers with comments unless I feel they are nescessary. I agree you have come a long way in two weeks, but it also means there is still much to be done. Don't give up hope because I give criticism.
You did a fine job on the texture, which I like. Anyway, the text doesn't fit in and should be left out of the sig all together. In addition, the render should be moved a little more to the left. Go check out the rule of thirds. This rule of thirds would help you to achieve better composition through better stock/render placement.
I can handle the harsh comments its cool lol but thanks all 3 of you, i hope to be able to create a sig that everyone likes oh and the feel it has forsaken is all me debacle even said i have a very unique style but thanks dude hope you like my future work also
I agree, it's a little rough. But it shows improvement on your techniques. Keep at it. For 2 weeks, your cookin'. Nice 1st sprite btw.
thanks guys ill make sure to read more tuts lol i think ive bought maybe 12-15 tuts off here so far but thanks for the comments guys i hope to get better, and the whole plan was for it to be rough and i was gonna make it either silver gold or copper and silver was to bright and gold was to bright also so i picked copper i tried to go for a look like in the future but not all high tech, idk lol but thanks guys
thanks i think so to everyone has different taste and everyone has a different opionon on whats good and whats not thats why when someone says its bad idc but i like it so thats all that matters
You've definately started on the right foot. It has a good feel to it. Very old skool That rule of thirds is INCREDIBLY useful. Things you need to improve on in your next sig: Focal; The focal needs to be defined, so keep your effects and most of your texture off it. Colour; It needs some more variation in the colour and some use of bright colours. Flow; This has lots of flow IMO, but it needs to be more focussed. Try doing some tutorials that utilize C4D. It'll be a big help. Text; Text placement is pretty good, but that big T is causing conflict in the flow, which means the text stands out too much to the eye. Good work for a beginner. I'm keen to see some more work from you. ;D
Thanks alot man that will really help i have about 9 tutorials ive bought that i havent even got around to looking at, but i will. Seems to me that its not just about graphics it has alot to do with the way everything is :| its like photography but thanks dude tbh i like it but my favorite would have to be the 2 in my sig atm but thanks for the info and tomorrow when i have time ill reload the psd and ill edit it mass thanks for the info guys
Yeah, i really love your second one. You've nailed the depth on that one You're almost looking at three planes of depth
Yeah my 2nd one has to be my favorite tbh, I love the colors in it but thanks again man i hope to get more known on here and help out with request and stuff soon if anyone would want me to make a sig for them lol IF! :| but yeah i wanna get better and i hope to start a shop soon, and i wanna get into ruby but once again thanks alot Here is some more of my work 1. -has no depth at all 2. -ppl said its cluddered :\ 3. -Alot of people loved this one besider the box and the text I have more but they suck really bad, i made like 5 crappy ones my first few days than debacle told me about this site and got me some tuts so here i am now tell me what u think of my work
