Hey this is my new Sig. i would like C&C on this.. i kinda like it my self. but idk i still think its missing sumthing. but hopfully you guys and tell me Made a new one. =) tell me what u think of both of them.!! plz.!
the second one is very nice....but the first one i thing that its monotone...if you had played with the contrast it could be better...without adding other colors _____________
first tag is oversharpened in parts and theres an outline around the girl, too monotone and not enough depth. second has too much going on for me and the render could be blended better
The renders look pretty slapped on, so I'd work on your blending. Also, there aren't much effects in the first one and the second one is too much splatter effects. Check out my free tutorial downloads in my sig to learn some new techniques.
First one needs to be blended and have some depth added... read some tutorials! You have a good starting point.