uuhm, don't take it offensive, but there are several things that could'v been done better. - i don't really see a focal point (well i see a hand but thats all i can identify). try making your render stand out a little more. the blending however is well (over)done - next thing is the lighting. you choose to make the lighting come from above the hand, however, the top of the hand has shadow on it. try to adjust your lighting to the lighting on the render. - the text needs a lot of work. try a different font and play with the blending options and modes. - last but not least, the flow needs work aswell. depth is well done however don't get discouraged by this, just follow tutorials and you'll learn fast
I'm gonna be harsh. The is a focal point?? See no focal don't see much in it. Looks blurry. See bits and pieces of...I don't know what they are. Text looks random,does not fit at all. Can't tell what going on. Over all,What is going on in it?
I am not sure what it is? I looked at the img for awhile and couldn't figure out what was on the image...
