New Sig C&C

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  1. SiteWhite

    SiteWhite Well-Known Member

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    Well... Let me know what you think, its not my best but i dont mind it.

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    C&C Please.
     
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  2. Nexus

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    Hey, i would suggest some blending work on render, and just some work on text could be done. Blending and position. :)

    That's how I feel, artists have own opinion's and styles. Based on what I see in your signatures your typography in this sig can most def be better though.
     
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    The site whit on the bottom is just so noone can steal it. In the show Barney is kind of a wanna be "suit" so to speak so i wanted to go with a normal text look. How do i go about blending that in more?
     
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    The text that way steals away from the art in my opinion, typography is key to me if it's included.

    Most have respect not to steal others work, and blended nicely you'll still have no worries.

    Anyway, blending render honestly im not familiar with brushing and splatter brushes to create sig background so I couldn't give good advice in blending. Im more of just not so much a fan of the background in whole. Makes render pop out as if he were standing in front of a screen getting photo taken.
     
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    I see what your saying. Sounds good. Ill try some things and set up a v2.
     
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    [​IMG]

    Hows this? I took out the site white hope noone steals it ;)
     
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    use a different font again
     
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    Lol what kind of font? It's suppose to be a font that looks professional because of who he is.
     
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    http://gravemandesign.deviantart.com/art/Can-Can-de-Bois-15607438
    http://www.theleagueofmoveabletype.com/fonts/7-league-gothic
    http://www.tenbytwenty.com/products/typefaces/nevis
    heres a great one;
    http://fontfabric.com/code-free-font-3/
    but do something interesting with it, not just sit it on there
    gotta somehow work with the artwork and make it MORE interesting, not just somethin slapped on, work it in somehow. use more than one maybe. bring my eye to it. make it something creative that im interested in looking at. typography is a huuugggeee part of a something like this, especially with it's intent and size. cant give any specific advice on what to do here, cuz honestly the background is almost a little boring, just try to work it in someone, blend it, tear it apart, space it differently, i dunno man, the important part is your creativity, not necessarily my advice. do what you like best, thats just what attracts my eye
     
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    Ehhhh???

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    Lol love the self employed dipshit one. Thanks. Ill work on it tomorrow and see what i come up with.
     
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    .entropy is right with the text, that's one of the most important pieces.

    No doubt mastering text will take practice.
     
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    [​IMG]

    Well theres version 4... and yes text is retarded to learn!! Ive looked at about 30 tutorials on it!
     
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    Are you using different texts in this? and is that wave above and below the text line custom?

    haha and i liked the text further away from render where it was, just because otherwise it leaves alot of empty room in signature.
     

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