New Portfolio

Discussion in 'Website Design and Coding' started by Calabur, Dec 19, 2008.

  1. Calabur

    Calabur Well-Known Member

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    Pretty simple but I likey :)
    Instead of green, you should make it red lol
     
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    I don't really see how it's simple... but thanks. :)

    and red would clash with the blue. :)
     
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    This has promise, the main issue where the site breaks down is the lower typography.

    Going into an aspect aside from just the design, ditch the drab biography. Immerse your user, talk to them. Same with the contact, not to mention that right side box feels underutilized. For example, ditch "Contact", switch it to a smaller heading, make it personal, "Looking to get in touch? You can reach me at [email protected] or call 555.5555".

    Of course, that's more my opinion than object critique of the design.

    The bottom navigation should be left justified and span across instead of being scrunched up and right justified.

    Plus the spacing around the "Development" image isn't the same all around... fix that...

    And frankly I just kind of hate those reverse and forward flaps sticking out. Some good coding could have those overlay on the image while mousing over, instead.

    Your logo/title needs more emphasis. Hell, I forgot it was there half the time.


    Lazy critiquing mood, that's all I can come up with for the time being...
     
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    Comments in bold.

    ... I might have come across as a dick then, but I really do appreciate you taking your time to leave detailed criticism like that, and I've definitely taken into account most of your points. :)

    Thanks :D
     
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    Don't worry about coming off as a dick; my critiques probably come off that way a lot of the time anyways.

    Now hurry up and give me a version two to pick at.


    =]
     
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    Nice, I really like this layout. Question, when you click on one of the tabs does one disappear and another appear?
     
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    Really wondering the same as above poster.

    But it sure is a very nice design. :]
     
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    I love this one it looks amazing imo great job man.
     

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