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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by bdiddie, Mar 7, 2011.

  1. Mar 7, 2011 at 11:03 PM #1
    bdiddie

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    c&c please
     
  2. Mar 9, 2011 at 9:25 AM #2
    [.BC.] David

    [.BC.] David 吉祥物

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    I think it needs more contrast. good blending
     
  3. Mar 10, 2011 at 11:01 AM #3
    Dreamon

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    The text and the render are fighting for attention. I think it would a lot better without the text or if you can make the text flow with the overall composition. :)
     
  4. Mar 11, 2011 at 10:11 PM #4
    bdiddie

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    hows this? i took the text out. it look better?

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    and then i did a few other things

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  5. Mar 15, 2011 at 12:55 AM #5
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