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Discussion in 'GR Classic Archive' started by AG Mountaineer, Dec 15, 2008.

  1. Dec 15, 2008 at 8:38 PM #1
    AG Mountaineer

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    Still working on collecting resources. Everytime I think of something to add I don't have it anymore, but I'm too lazy to go get it. Here's what I got this time, but I still need to get my stuff back to be my old self.
     
  2. Dec 15, 2008 at 10:44 PM #2
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    Very nice, but colouring needs work imo!
     
  3. Dec 16, 2008 at 10:36 PM #3
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    Too plain Mountaineer man
    I like flow and text but needs way for effects and more going on
     
  4. Dec 17, 2008 at 11:19 AM #4
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    Oof?
    Basically what's been said, need to get rid of the little text to the right of the bright bit too =)
     
  5. Dec 22, 2008 at 1:00 AM #5
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    Updated, added a few more effects and filled some negative space.

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  6. Dec 22, 2008 at 1:53 AM #6
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    Nice but I think the little lighting on the right makes the flow go off and it distracts
     
  7. Dec 23, 2008 at 10:32 AM #7
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    i like the text on this one m8

    v2 is better but you should keep the grainy effect on it still though
     

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