I like the depth and flow. The text is good too, maybe if it was a little closer to the render? Not a biggy though. I like how the hand on the right is blurred making you focus on the face. Maybe the focal could use a tad of sharpening. But overall, I like it a lot good job
Looks good to me. :] Only thing i'd do is sharpen the render and make the finger a bit less blurry. I like the text.
I actually like the text a lot. The focal needs to be sharpened, and maybe brightened (although the sharpening could take care of this) If you could fix basically from his neck on up to be closer to the original render I think it would look great.
