New Animated Sig

hi most people rated badly or said i needed too tweak it so here the newer version please say which you think is better and how i could again improve



heres the first attempt

 

hmmm thats looks ok maybe u should get rid of bevel i think it sorta ruins it

 

The text is scrolling to fast for people to read. And also you might want to work on the text for your sn. But all in all good work. I give it a 7.8/10. The animation makes it stand out.

 

You should use a different render...to go with the snipe thing..

 

Aye... Animation Too fast
6/10 , only because of the speed and render doesnt ift it, and you can barely see the sword

 

thanks for your replies

 

added the newest (updated) version of the sig too the top



and thereit is again

 

it looks great, btw i can read the text

 

Looks good...only i don't like the ending with the noise (doh ur right stupid me)...
8/10

 

thanks for the positive feedback ( its noise ) and i added it as i thought it looked pretty rubbish haviing the render and the blood dissapear instantly so i added noisee so i could do it smoothly but obliously didnt work lol thanks again (lol)

 

edited my mistake....

 

lol grain on high intensity is the same ( i think ) so you were partly right

 

my compliments, i really like it, i must learn how to animate it btw

 

thanks again silvaback i PMed you

 

you showed me at school but i will reply 9/10 another brilliant sig