Need Some Thoughts

hit me. this render was difficult, and i tried something new. let me know what you think.

Thank you!

 

Veeeery flat, no real light source except the brighter top-left, and if that is the light source it makes no sense in relevance to the renders shadow. Colours I like, but that shadow behind him needs movin' and some depth established.

 

thank you, i had the same thought, but with this render i hit a blank. i appreciate it.

 

The render definitely is not as easy as it looks to work with.. Even I tried it out.

The effects are too messy and disorganized for my tastes the right side looks like a C4D very badly smudged and covered with a few splatters. It just seems a bit random. So work only making everything compliment eachother.