Mystery

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by DaltonTheWhite, May 29, 2008.

  1. DaltonTheWhite

    DaltonTheWhite Well-Known Member

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  2. DraveN

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    The stock/render is too big for the canvas size imo and a bit oversharp,nice try keep em coming,well done m8
     
  3. Sanity Penguin

    Sanity Penguin My sex is on fire

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    Yeah, bit oversharpened and the stock actually looks pretty weird. What happened to her eye (near her hand)? seems way out of proportion with the rest :)
    Try creating a coloured version as well and I suggest you add a plain black border as well ;)
     
  4. JL Wamm

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    render is a bit big. but it has good depth
     
  5. DaltonTheWhite

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    You cannot see her eye cuz of her hand yea it's a bit weird but that's why i made it. :D
    Thnx for ur comments, i'll try a non black-white next time !
    And yea I puted the render without making it smaller or something, I though it was cool anyways, thnx.
     

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