My Sig Without A Tut

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by iManage, Nov 26, 2009.

  1. iManage

    iManage Junior Member

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    Okay so this is my first sig without a tut. c&c please.

    Mind you these have black borders so it might be hard to see them.

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    This one is sharpened, I kind of like it better but then I don't. :mellow:

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    This one is of course un-sharpened.
     
  2. Zakieb

    Zakieb Active Member

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    Nice one, but work on the typography :P
    looks good
     
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    i'm not feeling it, i don't recognize any flow
    sorry
     
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    I understand, shortly after I made it I recognized it had no flow.
    But it was my first sig without a tut so I gave it 110%.
     
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    well that was a g ood first sig without a tut tbh.
    but i think if you gave it 111% it would've been better
     
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    niceee
     
  7. Jyorei

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    Not feeling the flow here, and what throws it off is how busy the sig is yet I am not sure what your focal is.

    Try bringing out the focal more, burn/dodge would be effective in this tag. The middle seems bland in terms of depth.

    Nice text and overall sig. :)

    Great effort for no tutorial :D
     
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    maybe erase around the focal on the sharpened one so the focal pops out more
     
  9. Salme

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    Free tip - Don't sharpen the whole sig, sharpen around the focal.

    Use some C4Ds to create a better flow.

    Text needs alot of work.
     

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