Okay so this is my first sig without a tut. c&c please. Mind you these have black borders so it might be hard to see them. This one is sharpened, I kind of like it better but then I don't. :mellow: This one is of course un-sharpened.
I understand, shortly after I made it I recognized it had no flow. But it was my first sig without a tut so I gave it 110%.
well that was a g ood first sig without a tut tbh. but i think if you gave it 111% it would've been better
Not feeling the flow here, and what throws it off is how busy the sig is yet I am not sure what your focal is. Try bringing out the focal more, burn/dodge would be effective in this tag. The middle seems bland in terms of depth. Nice text and overall sig. Great effort for no tutorial
Free tip - Don't sharpen the whole sig, sharpen around the focal. Use some C4Ds to create a better flow. Text needs alot of work.