My Second Sig

This is my second sig I have made, feedback would be appreciated :lol:

I am not exactly great with text yet, but I am working on it.

 

I wonder, is it your second graphic or simply second attempt at a sig sized graphic?

 

Second graphic, I have never tried to make one til now, I have been reading alot of tutorials but finally decided to put them to use.

 

in that case its amazing ^^ haha, i mean its a novice tag obviously but high novice i say keep going on your path and you will be --- in no time

 

its soo good for a second i personally like it

 

Wow. Making faster progress then I am

Nice job, especially for only your second time.

 

Very nice concept.
However, I'm going to critique it candidly because I believe that's what will help you get better, k?

The composition is really cool, but the Focul point (the render itself) is far too busy. You need to have a point that is somewhat clear so that when ppl look at your tag it will draw their eyes to the centerpiece of your sig. So all the stuff in front of his face and stuff looks cool, but it leaves ppls eyes bouncing around your tag aimlessly.
Colors and text rock.
Depth is essential! Search some tuts here and on DA and I promise you'll learn some tricks to really give your tags depth.

Other than that, just keep practicing. ^_^
Good work

 

Thank you for the responses, I will be sure to look into some tutorials on depth because it seems to be the biggest complaint. Glad to hear I am heading in the right direction.

@mobi861: What font is that in your signature? I like it alot

 

its called Monoglyceride
http://www.1001fonts.com/font_details.html?font_id=1029
but the one in the top left is Impact