Not bad. Very nice for a second sig. The problems you got to solve are: The signature is too big, in my point of view, the best sizes for sigs are between 350-400x100-130. The Text is too big. you should have put it new the render. You need to learn render blending. there are many ways to do it. Learn it from tuts. I do like the backround. nice effects back there. Great start. keep on learing
Thanks Ive been reading a few tuts and still am but the backround took me a while to get down and thanks ill resize it
Well, do not see it as an offense but we all started small, I will be honest with you so that you can work out on that one. My first one looked even worse so do not mind and just go on. There is no flow in the signature, maybe a little little bit only. There is absolutely no lightning, except for that one around the sword which does not really fit into the background / signature style. The text is hard! to read and distracts from the render, so you have 3 focals (text, sword, render) The light should come from upper right corner, look where the render is white, and you can know it.
