My Second Design Pls Advise

this is my second games based design and i was wondering how u think i cud improve, thanks for any comments.

 

Not my style but i like it! Looks pretty good man. gj keep up the work

 

wrong section.

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Post them in this section when you make more, k?

http://www.gamerenders.com/forum/index.php?showforum=9

It's pretty good, but make the render more visible

 

Bah, Your Stuff section.

The video doesn't blend good with the background. :\

 

there could be alot better brushing the colors dont really go good with the video/render annd the video could be kinda blended on the edges. text could also be better

 

Video doesnt fit in, u'll get better replys in the right section.

 

Hey, hes special. He doesnt have to put it in the my stuff section like everyone else.