My Professional Opinion

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Clash, Jun 22, 2010.

  1. Clash

    Clash The Go-To Guy

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    So I should be impressed?

    Well, I do like the layout here. Nice attempt at a flow, but your type placement killed it. Font choice is iffy.

    Coloring ruins it for the most part... take advantage of the new tools in CS5 mr. "i made this in CS5 so it's automatically awesome"

    2/10
     
  2. NcoGniTo MarZ

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    I never said that lol
    Heres another and forget the text i dont have fonts right now and my text work isnt the best because i dont care for it
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    HI. What u think?
    Brighter
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    Throwing another in here.
     
  5. Clash

    Clash The Go-To Guy

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    Default fonts are fine. Arial and Helvetica are 2 of the most popular in all design.

    This piece just seems random. As I've stated, there's abstract, then there's random. I think you missed the mark here.

    1/10
     
  6. Clash

    Clash The Go-To Guy

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    Font - Impossible to read
    Cutout - still has black matte
    Background - very nice brushing?
    Coloring - needs to be toned down

    1/10
     
  7. Clash

    Clash The Go-To Guy

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    I've been a fan of your work so far. Still looking good. Only change I would make is flipping the image to face left to go with the type placement.

    9.5/10
     
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    ok imma try again :D
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    clash what programs do you use?
    sorry its off topic, but just thought to ask here
    nearly done with my newer design, kinda stuck on what to put in cos i got a fair bit on negative space...ill post it in a bit
     
  10. concept

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    How you doing clash?

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  11. Clash

    Clash The Go-To Guy

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    My dog swallowed a pack of bubble gum the other day. Her poop looked like this.

    2/10
     
  12. Clash

    Clash The Go-To Guy

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    For digital painting I use Coral Draw. Print ads - InDesign, Web Media - Photoshop/Flash, File Management - Bridge, Logos/Icons/Vectors - Illustrator, Video - Final Cut Pro
     
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    Clash The Go-To Guy

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    I think this is my favorite of yours. Color scheme is great here, highlights/shadows really show the depth. The type placement is good here, but I think would work better if the left side was aligned with the center of the heart shape farthest to the right and the top aligned to the top of the highest heart.

    Text treatment and font choice are great.

    10/10
     
  14. concept

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    I had a hard time with this text. I think the one I have on it now was the 14th try at it. It just didn't wanna fit anywhere. Especially where you suggested, I thought it would look good there as well maybe if i did it just the right way it would but I couldn't =\ Still messing around with it though.

    Thanks for the C&C like always man
     
  15. Elpida

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    Hi! It's me again. Thought about taking more professional opinion.

    A little more, never hurts.

    So here:
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    Tips on anything, even if it's a bad signature I just wanna know how to fair better with the adjustments.

    Oh! LOL although I did not add text, a few text placement pointers would be nice to read.

    Anyway, thanks Clash for the awesome reviews and yeah, I read the first one you gave me and it was awesome!

    Later-
     

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